Post by Dark Link M Smith on Mar 11, 2010 12:34:38 GMT -5
Captain Dea Smth
nicknames: WolfMan
age: 25
gender: Male
occupation: Bounty Hunter
Clan: None
height:6'
weight:200
hair color: Gold
eye color: Blue / Red :The red eye was a transplant gone wrong. So it became blood shoot and healed like that.
piercings/tattoos: one tattoo on left arm of a wolf
appearance Look when on the hunt
likes: Sake/Fighting/Hunting
dislikes: The Gifted but not all of them/ Anyone that trys to stop him.
personality: Dea is a marin. One side he's clam and cool and on the other side he goes mad and kills anything that comes after his life. He tends to look like he's okay but not. He hides hi true feelings about everything about his life. To him this is just a other job. Dea is clam and looks like he ready to kill but shows a caring side to the others but hides his true feelings about them. In his human body his has a look of sadness but only shows it to him self. When around others he shows a face of many things. His mind set about everything is always thinking. Is he doing the right thing? Or his he not? He tried to understand others but can't. When alone Dea reads books about love and other things showing his kindness to no one but a book
mother: Missing
father: Dead
siblings: None
history: Dea's was a child when his mother went missing and his father was killed by one of the Gifted and for every had a hold of him. No at the age of 25 He hunts them for what they did to him in the past and also looking for him mother who went missing around that time And Has only found clues. it was lately on that he found out she was a Gifted and didn't know what to do. So he wonders the world as a bounty hunter looking for her and Gifted to kill.
alias: N/A
age: [optional] N/A
rp experience: 18 years
role playing sample:
Just a small role play I did. Has nothing to do with my bio.
"" Lin Was walking about Hyrule Like he does every day. He Walks about looking for Clues on his missing Sister. He comes to castle Town everyone knows him there and is a kind man to them and always help out, But to the under world he's a deadly man that will kill anyone for the right pay. At night he enters the Castle Thinking there may be some clue there. He goes in and out of the shadows like an Assassin and fears nothing. Then Lin here something. its Lady Zelda he hides in some room but see enters the same you. In time he see's it's a bath Room and he turns to Lady Zelda as she starts to undress . Her skin was a white as snow and it had so much life to it. Everyone knew that she was in love with Link Be Lin Didn't care for he knew that she was still pure. But He dare not stay for the full show he need to get out and out of the castle. He kept an eye on her ass he saw her pure body. He was not to over joy about it but he had to do a job. As she enter the bath he started t walk away and tired to get out as his hand touch the door Lady Zelda was behind he as he open the door a sword was going for his back as he jumped back trying to hide his face. She looked at him as she had warped her self with a towel. He looked around trying to find away out and said Good Evening Lady Zelda. it's a shame but i must be going. He said as he said. he then ran passed her and out the window. and into a small pound. it was deep for a safe landing. as he got out of the water he saw Knights coming his was and he started to run as lady Zelda looked out the window.""
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And your RP example is fine, but you switch from past tense to present tense. SC writes primarily in past tense while we're IC, but if you want to you can do something else in the general board or in your character diaries 